AsgardScientist | 1 points | May 07 2022 15:01:14

浪友们高三会写这样的英文essay嘛😆

https://www.reddit.com/gallery/ukf4fj

[-] Edogawa_Ranpo_ | 1 points | May 07 2022 15:17:46

我是衡水中学毕业的，高考前天天写，跟绣花一样写的太慢了也写不好，经常被老师批评；
同学们写的飞快还工整，不知咋练的

我们学校写这玩意感觉光注重书写了，练了半天字漂亮的不行，内容狗屁不通

[-] Edogawa_Ranpo_ | 1 points | May 07 2022 15:26:49

现在给我一篇这样的文章，我大脑会自动屏蔽写的内容，每盯着一秒就回忆起高考前自己时刻要注意哪个字母写成啥样，天天嗯练这个的情景

[-] WEWCEW | 1 points | May 07 2022 15:22:28

如果是英语国家，这个错误点和量有点废了

[-] Prestigious-Bear-789 | 1 points | May 07 2022 17:15:53

只会hello everyone this is peng shuai

[-] Richard_Chang | 1 points | May 07 2022 17:46:14

I have never really understood what prompts 🕷️ to construct such unnecessarily complex sentences as the opening one found in the essay above, which usually defeats the purpose of writing essays because essays are supposed to fulfill the purpose of conveying an author’s opinions to its readers clearly, an example of which I have demonstrated here with this ridiculously lengthy word salad.

愚蠢的人才会追求形式上的复杂，真正智慧的人可以简洁地解释复杂的道理。只会用一些似懂非懂的高级词汇堆砌从句的🕷️，显然属于前者。

[-] Hongkongjai | 1 points | May 08 2022 05:27:27

寫文最重要的是精簡和relevant.

[-] bjcn1989 | 1 points | May 07 2022 18:10:04

sac？

[-] bjcn1989 | 1 points | May 07 2022 18:21:21

感觉“because”用得太多了一点，可以试着调整句型用别的词代替，比如due to...，as...之类的。词汇量还是需要提高一下，有些expression稍微差强人意了点 。多读读英文书吧。

[-] WTF_Lilbri185 | 1 points | May 08 2022 03:33:38

支那高中英语需要学吗？ 选择题那么多我不不写作文都随便90分及格。

[-] Iwata_Satoru | 1 points | May 08 2022 14:06:57

高三考的日语捏